Let me share
my secret. In my romantic suspense
novels, danger escalates. So does the
sensual side of the protagonists’ relationship, but here’s the kicker—write fresh. Use new descriptive phrases and imagination,
giving a fresh spin on sexy encounters. Describe the hero in ways that make your
reader swoon along with the heroine. “She
raked her hand through his short, blond hair and then leaned to kiss him.” Yes, the mouth is important.
Words
enhancing descriptions of the mouth:
addictive, alluring, arrogant, bitter, carnal, cynical, delicious,
eloquent, expressive, hot, luscious, pompous, ripe, salacious, satiny,
scornful, sensual, swollen, vengeful, wet, wicked, willing.
Try making up
phrases: curve to her sensuous mouth, lush sweetness, salacious grin, strained
line of his sculpted mouth, warm and willing mouth. He devoured her mouth with deep sweeping
strokes of his tongue. He took hungry
possession of her mouth. His open mouth came down on hers.
And then,
there is the tongue which cn assault, caress, circle, consume, dip between,
drag, elicit a moan, explore, lave, plunder, roll over, tease, trail, work,
zeroed in on. His tongue made wet trails
over her puckered lips. Using the tip of
her tongue, she made circular motions up and down his length.
More tips
are on their way. Coming in 2017:
Thanks for sharing your tips :-)
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